If I were to make our AS piece again I would make our plot line a lot more definite. We tried to leave the storyline of the girl being in the bath up to interpretation to try and make it mysterious and draw the audience in. I now think it would have been more effective if we have made the girl appear very vulnerable with bruises, more effective blood on her and her face looking more traumatized. This way we could have made it more of a thriller/horror and it would have been focused around more serious topics that are pertinent to real life such as abuse or even serial killers/murderers. I think this would have been more effective and would have drawn the audience in as they would have felt protective over this clearly vulnerable girl and would want to know what happened instead of having to work it out for themselves.
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